I cut you from my branches
With the sharpest knife
I hacked you from my hiding place
In the tree above the summer house
And threw you to the ground
Though you were still unripe
In truth I did want you
And with such tender care
I nurtured your roots
And your shoots growing fair
With water from the holy well
Carried in my hair
In truth I did want you
I hungered for you, needed you
So I planted you
And seeded you
Beside the summer house
And in my hiding place you grew
Then in the Autumn we picked berries
In an offhanded way
Wandering the lanes
With nothing to say
I picked fruit at your feet
That I hoped I could keep
And eat in the Spring
In memory of this
half-ripe
half-dreamed
half-realised thing
But in the cold heart of Winter
I realised my folly
Confronted by Death
I visited the Fool
And the wisdom he offered
was “Stick to the rules…
That fruit is not yours
That you hide in your glen
So lose it you must
To begin life again”
So I climbed to my place
In the tree above the summer house
And I found where you grew
Around the very heart of me
Then I visited the kitchen
Of the husband and wife
And I cut you from my branches
With the sharpest knife
Mallika McCarthy, January 2006
(one from the archives… MMc April 2014) 🙂
photo by M.McCarthy 2011 – Autumn at Oughtmama – The Burren, Co Clare, Ireland ❤
Wow, this is fantastic. Beautiful. I love the word choice. Could you read some of the poems on my blog, and tell me what you think? I need an expert’s eye.
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Hiya Charlotte, thanks again, very kind of you! 🙂 Did you read my last reply to your request? I’ll happily take a look at your blog, for sure! If you are specifically wanting feedback, best if you email me something in particular you’d like me to look at: mallikamccarthy@gmail.com. Also happy to just take a wander over to your blog and say hi 🙂 Mallika
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